I. dance to please it let it kill you slowly demanding, careless of the world it rides through and broken dreams in its wake II. kinetic and restless as if always caged no matter how big the room is overload sweep away pain in that flood of elation III. underwater predator waiting to snap clenching teeth on the innocent limb that stepped too far into the hidden lands feeling the frenzy of blood salty red heavenly taste stinging the thinking mind washed away and forgotten bowing to the impulse IV. smooth curves soft scents liquid voice wipe reality away sweet surrender seek it forever wish to be held there through the night V. so innocent when it catches your eye alone begging for help searching for freedom in you as if locked away so innocent when it calls to you alone waiting to spring and sink claws into your soul such illusion
This didn't quite come out as I intended. It still has the double meaning, just a little too subtle. Oh, well, nobody else knows what it's supposed to be anyway, so I guess it doesn't matter.
It's looking for a title. I want one that is accurate, yet does nothing to either illuminate or clarify the double meaning.
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