Untitled II - Poetry - Lakeside Park

Untitled II

I.
   dance to please it
   let it kill you
   slowly
   demanding, careless
   of the world
   it rides through
   and broken dreams
   in its wake

II.
   kinetic and restless
   as if always caged
   no matter how big the room is
      overload
     sweep away pain
    in that flood
   of elation

III.
   underwater predator
   waiting to snap
    clenching teeth on the
     innocent limb
      that stepped too far
       into the hidden lands
    feeling the frenzy of blood
     salty red heavenly taste
      stinging the thinking mind
       washed away and forgotten
    bowing to the impulse

IV.
   smooth curves
   soft scents
   liquid voice
      wipe reality away
   sweet surrender
   seek it
   forever
      wish
      to be
      held
      there
   through the night

V.
   so innocent
   when it catches your eye
   alone
   begging for help
   searching for freedom in you
   as if locked away
   so innocent
   when it calls to you
   alone
   waiting to spring
   and sink claws into your soul
   such illusion

This didn't quite come out as I intended. It still has the double meaning, just a little too subtle. Oh, well, nobody else knows what it's supposed to be anyway, so I guess it doesn't matter.

It's looking for a title. I want one that is accurate, yet does nothing to either illuminate or clarify the double meaning.


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